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miércoles, 25 de marzo de 2009

A family is this

" A family is this " by Ryan Makenzee

To be in a family like mine

Is so divine

Where love is shown

Hurt is shared

Our love for each other is never impaired


We walk

We laugh

We cry


But we are a family

And we do it all together

For as a family

We do it all as one


You hurt one

You hurt all

And as a family unit

We will all stand tall


For we are a family

A family full of strength

A family full of love

A family no one can touch

That’s why I love my family so much.


The poem that I choose which is called “A family is this” by Ryan Makenzee describes how is a family and also how must be a family, making a comparison with his own family.

He explains that in a family nothing can be hidden the love, the pain or the hurts that you feel, everything is shared because he says that they can support each other, in a few words the family is something to be and stay as one.

As an example of this in the poem says “we talk, we laugh, we cry, but we are a family and we do it all together”.

In my opinion I think that in a family it is not necessary to evolved everyone because, not always they still together as one sometimes we fight or we have some differences or even we moved away for work or we do our life, in my case I would do my life apart, and my problems do not need to affected my family, and if I choose to live alone I should face them as an adult.

The other topic in the poem is the love in the family, wich strengthen the family and, that is what helps the family to be united.

As a conclusion I think that family ties needs the family united and also needs the communication because if there isn’t too much communication the ties could be broken, and you don’t need to relate your family to your own issues because you need to fixed them by your own.

4 comentarios:

Jano dijo...

Ok, your introduction is weak. May be if you put a question at the begin could be better.

You need to Review your punctuation. for example at the first paragraph you need to put some period.

sdore dijo...

Don't forget to add an "s" to your verbs with a singular subject:
The poem describe... describes
He explain... explains

heroinedesire dijo...

I agree with Alejandro but I like how you express your ideas, they are very clear.

west side dijo...

that is true your ideas are very clear.

sometimes your sentences are kind of longer. try to make them shorter.By the way every thing is okey

do not forget the punctuation XD
JAJA!